The following is an excerpt from my short story, "...to a Flame." 

"...to a flame" by Eric Fritzius

                

            It was a cool West Virginia summer evening and the wife and I had just finished a late supper of her famous steak & stinkers—cube steak and fried ramps.  The sun was starting to set over the hills behind us, turning the mountains to the east purple and casting a glow over the whole valley.  We'd retired to the porch to enjoy a beer, with our feet propped up on the rusty old deep freeze that I still ain't gotten round to getting rid of.  It seemed a natural setting in which to open discussions for where our Saturday evening might lead us.  We were part way into negotiations when we were interrupted, mid-smooch, by the grind of half-bald tires on the gravel road.  I saw the yellow door panel on the otherwise red Dodge pick-up and knew it was Virgil Hawks pulling up. 

          "Evenin', Virgil," I said as he staggered up the walk.  "What brings you out this...?"  My voice dropped off as I caught sight of Virgil's face.  It was ghost white and held an expression of what I can only describe as pants-filling terror. 

"Hell, Virgil.  What's wrong?"

            "Jeff, I'm in trouble somethin’ fierce.  Evenin' Marsha," he said, touching the bill of his cap to my wife with one hand.  His other hand held the stub of a cigarette.

            "Can't be all that bad, Virg."

            "Oh, yes it can."

            "Well, okay then.  Come on up and tell us about it."

            Virgil scratched at the back of his sandy-colored head.  "No.  I'd rather not.  I think you best come out to the truck, Jeff.  Somethin’ you probably ought to see."

       I shrugged an apology in Marsha's direction for my untimely departure from negotiations.  Not having much use for Virgil, she frowned and went in the house while I followed him on out to the drive.

            Virgil popped open the tailgate of his Dodge.  An old tarp in the truck bed was covering something big and lumpy.  He pulled back the edge of it.

            "Well, I'll be, Virgil.  You've got a dead mothman in the back of your truck."






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